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:: The Portable Magic of Life :: by Sangrde

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Amazing range of colors in this piece! I love how saturated it is and the range of brushes that you've used to create a mystical effect. The highlights are also very well done, particularly in the skin and in the hair. It gives her a really warm, glowing look! The eyes are mesmerizing, I really love her eye color and the way her eyelashes flare out.
It looks like you spent a lot of time and effort on the shading and details in the face and hair, but as you move to the clothing the same level of detail is not consistent. The shading becomes less defined, like in the bow, and the coloring in the body of the dress doesn't blend as well as the rest of her body.
The proportions are also quite a bit off. Her arms look very small and short and her chest and waist are inhumanly thin. Her head is thicker than her waist.... It sort of gives a bobble head appearance. Her legs also seem to be coming out at us, but they're not foreshortened, which makes them in turn seem a little on the smaller side. Because her feet are significantly closer to the viewer, they should be larger to convey this distance. However, overall I think the bright colors and enchanting features of this piece made the issue of proportions less noticeable.
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Sangrde Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for such constructive critique ~~

Yes I like the concept but this one is really need improvement especially the anatomy and background. I wanna re create this piece sometime when i get better~^.^!~
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f1utterby3 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh man, well I totally want to see it if you do re-create it at some point! And no problem :heart:
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